I Avoid Shopping - full stop
Shopping - I would rather watch the grass grow!3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
The final two lines in the third stanza summarise the Christmas mayhem very well indeed together with the final line of the poem - what happens to us at Christmas?
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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The final two lines in the third stanza summarise the Christmas mayhem very well indeed together with the final line of the poem - what happens to us at Christmas?
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you gfor your splendid review
Take care
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a great Christmas shopping poem. You have nailed the hustle and bustle of it all. It really does take your joy away after dealing with this mess all day.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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What a great Christmas shopping poem. You have nailed the hustle and bustle of it all. It really does take your joy away after dealing with this mess all day.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Take care and stay safe.
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You're welcome.
Cecilia
Comment from Barry Penfold
Well-constructed poem with nice rhyming. Image very good and I can feel the frustration rising as you take us through your shopping journey. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Well-constructed poem with nice rhyming. Image very good and I can feel the frustration rising as you take us through your shopping journey. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Hi Barry
Thank you for your lovely. I really do hate shopping!
Take care