The Scar
A poem about how a girl falls and it leaves a scar.5 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem captures the intensity and vividness of a momentous event. The imagery and emotions conveyed through your words are compelling, painting a clear picture of the experience and the lasting impact it had on you. The structure and rhythm give it a dynamic flow, making the narrative engaging and poignant.
Writing about scars--both physical and emotional--can be a powerful way to explore and process personal experiences. It's impressive how you turned a single word into such an evocative piece.
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Your poem captures the intensity and vividness of a momentous event. The imagery and emotions conveyed through your words are compelling, painting a clear picture of the experience and the lasting impact it had on you. The structure and rhythm give it a dynamic flow, making the narrative engaging and poignant.
Writing about scars--both physical and emotional--can be a powerful way to explore and process personal experiences. It's impressive how you turned a single word into such an evocative piece.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I really like this piece. Almost everyone has some sort of scar. I absolutely love that you used what came to your mind first as inspiration for this piece. Thank you for sharing and happy writing!
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I really like this piece. Almost everyone has some sort of scar. I absolutely love that you used what came to your mind first as inspiration for this piece. Thank you for sharing and happy writing!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
Isn't it funny the things that pop into our mind when we have a writing prompt. Good luck in the contest.
I know that I have a couple scars, and you never forget the stories from where they came from. Each scar has a story that's for sure.
I noticed that you have an extra word in this sentence
....( of the a car)
I'm sure you'll want to get rid of the "a"
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Isn't it funny the things that pop into our mind when we have a writing prompt. Good luck in the contest.
I know that I have a couple scars, and you never forget the stories from where they came from. Each scar has a story that's for sure.
I noticed that you have an extra word in this sentence
....( of the a car)
I'm sure you'll want to get rid of the "a"
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the correction and Happy early Christmas!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A unique offering for the free form contest with unexpected rhyming throughout... the repetition brings the reader back each time from the abundance of rhyming... Good luck in the contest!
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A unique offering for the free form contest with unexpected rhyming throughout... the repetition brings the reader back each time from the abundance of rhyming... Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from shad blunt
Some of our deepest scars or the most beautiful works of art. May we always remember the incredible reminder on how we fell, that we got back up to fight another day. Enjoyed the poem and Happy Holidays to come. Shadrach
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Some of our deepest scars or the most beautiful works of art. May we always remember the incredible reminder on how we fell, that we got back up to fight another day. Enjoyed the poem and Happy Holidays to come. Shadrach
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
