The Naughty List
Footprints in the Snow contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Thesis
Very creative, I believe this would certainly change the ways of many on the Naughty list if it were true. It's a sad commentary on humanity. Just the fact that they have evolved to be ungrateful, disgusting beings, and the way Santa reacts to their behavior, should be a lesson to us all.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Very creative, I believe this would certainly change the ways of many on the Naughty list if it were true. It's a sad commentary on humanity. Just the fact that they have evolved to be ungrateful, disgusting beings, and the way Santa reacts to their behavior, should be a lesson to us all.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the great review, Thesis. Yes, it's sad how the world's becoming. I really appreciate the stars and stop in, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great
Christmas.
Ron
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really like how you've taken the classic Christmas story and given it a dark twist! The idea of Santa ready to punish the naughty is fantastic. It really grabs attention and keeps you hooked with every line. Your writing style creates a world that's chilling but also so exciting.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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I really like how you've taken the classic Christmas story and given it a dark twist! The idea of Santa ready to punish the naughty is fantastic. It really grabs attention and keeps you hooked with every line. Your writing style creates a world that's chilling but also so exciting.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Michael. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great Christmas, friend.
Ron
Comment from royowen
This sounds like a very good strategy to me. Why there has to be a naughty and a nice list I'm not sure, but the naughty list needs to become nice, and really it's just decision, free will you know, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This sounds like a very good strategy to me. Why there has to be a naughty and a nice list I'm not sure, but the naughty list needs to become nice, and really it's just decision, free will you know, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the great review, Roy. Yes, having more on the 'nice' list would make this world a better place. I appreciate the stars, friend. Have yourself a great Christmas.
Ron
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Well done Ron