You say, I say
Visual of life2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such powerful emotion. The way you share the feeling of being trapped and the struggle to escape really drew me in. The line "I see it in your eyes, heard it in your voice" hits hard. The honesty and pain in your words are so compelling. Keep sharing your voice! It's strong and brave.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Your poem has such powerful emotion. The way you share the feeling of being trapped and the struggle to escape really drew me in. The line "I see it in your eyes, heard it in your voice" hits hard. The honesty and pain in your words are so compelling. Keep sharing your voice! It's strong and brave.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank You doesn't seem to have enough comparison, to how grateful I am for your feedback. It validates that I am doing something good and following my passion for writing.
Comment from kahpot
Wow! this is sad yet powerful, I can only give one piece of advice to this person, get out and leave this sniveling coward behind, if they do not have trust or confidence in themselves, they will never have for another****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Wow! this is sad yet powerful, I can only give one piece of advice to this person, get out and leave this sniveling coward behind, if they do not have trust or confidence in themselves, they will never have for another****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for the feedback, and your right about that. How they treat you shows how they truly feel about you
