Fly Past Me
Brief description of my battle and defeat of anxiety attack2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! Your poem is so powerful! I felt the weight of wanting to be left untouched by what brings pain. The rhyme flows beautifully. I love your choice of words like "omit" and "lure" - it really drives home the longing for peace. Great job!
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Congrats on your first post! Your poem is so powerful! I felt the weight of wanting to be left untouched by what brings pain. The rhyme flows beautifully. I love your choice of words like "omit" and "lure" - it really drives home the longing for peace. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
Comment from Neonewman
This is an excellent entry for this particular writing prompt. I particularly liked this line.
Fly past me and beyond me, for your knowledge bears me pain,
Good luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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This is an excellent entry for this particular writing prompt. I particularly liked this line.
Fly past me and beyond me, for your knowledge bears me pain,
Good luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Many thanks Steve
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Thank you
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My pleasure.
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Many thanks for your kind words
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My pleasure, Jodi.
