Chosen Family
2-4-2 Poem contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I like what you have written here, but if I may fam-i-ly is three syllables I believe, maybe fam'ly would work, (I may be wrong) wouldn't surprise me, none the less very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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I like what you have written here, but if I may fam-i-ly is three syllables I believe, maybe fam'ly would work, (I may be wrong) wouldn't surprise me, none the less very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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You're right. thanks
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An all-inclusive look at the true meaning of friendship when both sides are all in! :) Great thought to condense into this short form -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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An all-inclusive look at the true meaning of friendship when both sides are all in! :) Great thought to condense into this short form -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you
Comment from papa55mike
That's a lovely thought. Please check your last line; family has three syllables. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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That's a lovely thought. Please check your last line; family has three syllables. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you