Snapshots of Life
treasures found in an old photo album2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
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Your life seems to have been an interesting one, but give us more DETAILS.
1. What song are you referring to in paragraph 1? Give its title.
2. In paragraph 2 cite at least one KIND of memory that is a favorite now. For example, dates I had.
3. In paragraph 3 explain why any of the three examples cited is special.
4. In paragraph 4 tell us where you moved after leaving Minnesota.
5. Your summary of your life now is good in paragraph 5.
6. Combine paragraphs 5 & 6.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with the criteria outlined on the Q&A page.**
Your life seems to have been an interesting one, but give us more DETAILS.
1. What song are you referring to in paragraph 1? Give its title.
2. In paragraph 2 cite at least one KIND of memory that is a favorite now. For example, dates I had.
3. In paragraph 3 explain why any of the three examples cited is special.
4. In paragraph 4 tell us where you moved after leaving Minnesota.
5. Your summary of your life now is good in paragraph 5.
6. Combine paragraphs 5 & 6.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read my story and leave your helpful feedback.
What song am I referring to -
"When did I get old? Derrick Dove & the Peacekeepers ask that in their song" Perhaps I wasn't clear enough in my reference to the song and hope that the change I made to my story helps. As for your other questions, I think they are answered in the story I wrote and the examples I gave of the sort of memories I find in my old photo album.
Comment from royowen
My wife and I have done a lot of travelling over the years and it brings much joy to peruse the old memories of raising children, taking care and relating to beautiful grandchildren such joy from doing that, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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My wife and I have done a lot of travelling over the years and it brings much joy to peruse the old memories of raising children, taking care and relating to beautiful grandchildren such joy from doing that, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you.
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Welcome