Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

I thought I reviewed this post... weird.

Excellent entry for the renga book. I created it Saturday and we have 12 chapters!

Thank you very much for participating.

Gypsy
Good form and composition. The presentation and imagery is beautiful. Well done!

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -  Atticus

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024

hmm... i thought you reviewed it too... double weird... anyway, thank you (again!) 😁😅✌️💙🖊️🦄🍁

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

You and Gypsy are putting on a fine and entertaining tag-team match. I found your hidden secret. I dragged out that barely visible small patch of some kind of squiggly lines and discovered it is a mainly hidden replica of the above illustration.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024

you mean this one: ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
it's called a "tilde" ~ cute character, cute name lol

thank you jim!! ~ 😁✌️💙🖋️🦄 ~

reply by jim vecchio on 02-Dec-2024

Cute and creative, that's you.

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024

😁✌️

reply by jim vecchio on 04-Dec-2024

🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Great metaphor of the leaves and our memories. The idea of looking up reminds me that God is there to assist us through everything. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024

hehe thank you barbara! 😁🤞💙🖋️🦄😎

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I enjoyed your directional contrast of looking "back" to bring your perspective upwards. It's true that remembering happy memories can bring us to a more optimistic view.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024

true... thank you helen! 🤔😊👍💙🖊️🦄🍁