Singularity
Beyond our intelligence11 total reviews
Comment from forestport12
I was captivated by your notes! This poem intrigued me from the start. I'm glad you explained what the title means. The future would appear scary, and from what I've seen on the news, there are all kinds of prediction ranges, from an apocalypse to utopia. One aspect I caught was that man is made from stardust, a scientific fact, and yet it says, "God created man from the dust of the ground." the paradox you created here fascinating.
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I was captivated by your notes! This poem intrigued me from the start. I'm glad you explained what the title means. The future would appear scary, and from what I've seen on the news, there are all kinds of prediction ranges, from an apocalypse to utopia. One aspect I caught was that man is made from stardust, a scientific fact, and yet it says, "God created man from the dust of the ground." the paradox you created here fascinating.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Well, this is something completely different. Out of the blue so to speak and I like the concept. If it leads us to a better world then I am all for it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Well, this is something completely different. Out of the blue so to speak and I like the concept. If it leads us to a better world then I am all for it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
What fascinating and intriguing read, I can understand that AI will outlast the human, but can it survive or improve without the human, and yes, we do fear it in some circumstances, reading this reminded me of a film
"the lawnmower man" based on virtual reality, very interesting and well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What fascinating and intriguing read, I can understand that AI will outlast the human, but can it survive or improve without the human, and yes, we do fear it in some circumstances, reading this reminded me of a film
"the lawnmower man" based on virtual reality, very interesting and well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is an interesting piece of poetry, predicting the explosion of intellect with the emergence of AI, and mankind's inability to restrain a speculative futuristic AI from outsmarting humans. Well done, my friend. I enjoyed your conviction here.
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This is an interesting piece of poetry, predicting the explosion of intellect with the emergence of AI, and mankind's inability to restrain a speculative futuristic AI from outsmarting humans. Well done, my friend. I enjoyed your conviction here.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from EeanBlack
What you stated about one brain size can only be realized in a physical sense. The average brain weighs about 3 lbs. As with people, brains are all different sizes. Hypothetic future events are only speculation. If you are talking about AI iteratively redesigning itself, making itself more intelligent, again, this is speculative. Like physics, it's mostly theory or a simple hypothesis until or even if it is ever proven. I like the thought of nanobots, but I wouldn't want them inside my body when they break down, and they will. You sound convincing though. Maybe you are on to something. You are much deeper than I am. Good luck.
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What you stated about one brain size can only be realized in a physical sense. The average brain weighs about 3 lbs. As with people, brains are all different sizes. Hypothetic future events are only speculation. If you are talking about AI iteratively redesigning itself, making itself more intelligent, again, this is speculative. Like physics, it's mostly theory or a simple hypothesis until or even if it is ever proven. I like the thought of nanobots, but I wouldn't want them inside my body when they break down, and they will. You sound convincing though. Maybe you are on to something. You are much deeper than I am. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is an interesting poem. The world of AI, which I know nothing about. The question you pose is, "What am I?" I think you are molecules that make up your body, even more I just don't know. Well it is an interesting one, if not confusing. I am a little slow on the uptake sometimes and truly have no idea what you are talking about. Perhaps you can fill me in so I'm not so clueless.
Cecilia
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This is an interesting poem. The world of AI, which I know nothing about. The question you pose is, "What am I?" I think you are molecules that make up your body, even more I just don't know. Well it is an interesting one, if not confusing. I am a little slow on the uptake sometimes and truly have no idea what you are talking about. Perhaps you can fill me in so I'm not so clueless.
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I only give you four stars for stealing from an excerpt on
the theory of Singularity by Ray Kurzweil's book on the same topic. You make claims that are someone else's idea and write as if it were your idea. I don't believe that will happen in my lifetime anyway.
Jesse
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I only give you four stars for stealing from an excerpt on
the theory of Singularity by Ray Kurzweil's book on the same topic. You make claims that are someone else's idea and write as if it were your idea. I don't believe that will happen in my lifetime anyway.
Jesse
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You didn't read my authors notes.
Nothing I wrote other than the title of the poem is taken from Kurzweil's book.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from royowen
I'm so glad you mentioned Eve, the reason they were tempted was that Eve was told sage could become as God, was told God lied, but there is a mechanism that tells us, no one is like unto God, but, like Satan, we are self deceived, pride is the enemy, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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I'm so glad you mentioned Eve, the reason they were tempted was that Eve was told sage could become as God, was told God lied, but there is a mechanism that tells us, no one is like unto God, but, like Satan, we are self deceived, pride is the enemy, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Neonewman
Wow! This is a captivating insight into the future. Maybe not so far fetched, which makes this a little terrifying. Great job on this contest entry.
God bless,
Steve
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Wow! This is a captivating insight into the future. Maybe not so far fetched, which makes this a little terrifying. Great job on this contest entry.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
Wow what an interesting read you had me hooked right from the start it's all very fascinating and terrifying at the same time. I can't keep up woth technology now never mind in 20 years time. Excellent poem, well thought out and put together. Good luck with the contest
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Wow what an interesting read you had me hooked right from the start it's all very fascinating and terrifying at the same time. I can't keep up woth technology now never mind in 20 years time. Excellent poem, well thought out and put together. Good luck with the contest
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024