BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Buds Bask in Sunlight"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh what a wonderful offering of the cyclical nature of our Earth and its seasons as it mirrors the seasons of our lives! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
Oh what a wonderful offering of the cyclical nature of our Earth and its seasons as it mirrors the seasons of our lives! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You always make these blooms sound so romantic and pretty June, you are a lover of all flowers and I enjoyed your few uplifting words for these buds in Autumn, Love Dolly x
You always make these blooms sound so romantic and pretty June, you are a lover of all flowers and I enjoyed your few uplifting words for these buds in Autumn, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent chapter one for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right composition of syllables and lines. Thank you for participating with such a beautiful verse.
Gypsy
Excellent chapter one for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right composition of syllables and lines. Thank you for participating with such a beautiful verse.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool haiku...
i like the image of spring buds being nourished into fruit for the autumn harvest...
i like the pink and purple, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
ooh cool haiku...
i like the image of spring buds being nourished into fruit for the autumn harvest...
i like the pink and purple, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
I do like this! Your illustration is paired nicely with your 5-7-5 Renga start. Your selected illustration and color scheme just add to my enjoyment.
One gets a vivid impression of the feeling you expressed.
Mark
I do like this! Your illustration is paired nicely with your 5-7-5 Renga start. Your selected illustration and color scheme just add to my enjoyment.
One gets a vivid impression of the feeling you expressed.
Mark
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written 575 but according to your rules, you were supposed to have a second 577 on the same topic and you failed to do so. I was wondering if maybe this was an oversight on your part. Patricia.
This is a very nicely written 575 but according to your rules, you were supposed to have a second 577 on the same topic and you failed to do so. I was wondering if maybe this was an oversight on your part. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is lovely. I will also try it. I hope I can measure up. My poetry is usually on the silly side. Have a good week.
Happy holidays to you and yours. Karen :-)
This is lovely. I will also try it. I hope I can measure up. My poetry is usually on the silly side. Have a good week.
Happy holidays to you and yours. Karen :-)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful read, I just posted a Renga, and I think I may have got it wrong, as my stanzas differ from yours, still, that's why I joined this club so I may learn, very well written****kahpot
What a wonderful read, I just posted a Renga, and I think I may have got it wrong, as my stanzas differ from yours, still, that's why I joined this club so I may learn, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
I like your conversational discourse considering the choices that we make in life and how they affect others. We do need to weigh our actions to make sure that we can benefit and not harm others.
I like your conversational discourse considering the choices that we make in life and how they affect others. We do need to weigh our actions to make sure that we can benefit and not harm others.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
The words are so true and the image so beautiful. I do not believe I have reviewed a Renga before but you have a good one here. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
The words are so true and the image so beautiful. I do not believe I have reviewed a Renga before but you have a good one here. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024