Snowfall
2-4-2 contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Snowflakes that are falling is not something that I will be seeing here where I live. I was able to walk outside this morning without having to wear a jacket. I did wear a sweatshirt which helped a little bit, but it was getting pretty warm by the time I got back from my walk. I enjoyed your 242 entry for the contest. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Snowflakes that are falling is not something that I will be seeing here where I live. I was able to walk outside this morning without having to wear a jacket. I did wear a sweatshirt which helped a little bit, but it was getting pretty warm by the time I got back from my walk. I enjoyed your 242 entry for the contest. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Hi Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from RodG
Your shortie describes a wintry scene already becoming too familiar. I like the smooth cadence of your poem from line to line. So much conveyed in only eight syllables. Rod
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Your shortie describes a wintry scene already becoming too familiar. I like the smooth cadence of your poem from line to line. So much conveyed in only eight syllables. Rod
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Hi Rod, thank you for your comments and review. Dove