2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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13 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
The poem and the artwork go very well together. The raven is always a remarkable symbol, not only for Edgar Allan Poe, and it takes an exceptional effort to succeed with this symbol.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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The poem and the artwork go very well together. The raven is always a remarkable symbol, not only for Edgar Allan Poe, and it takes an exceptional effort to succeed with this symbol.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this 2-4-2. It definitely evokes an image and a mood. What an attractively dramatic presentation you created. Congratulations on the first place win!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I liked reading this 2-4-2. It definitely evokes an image and a mood. What an attractively dramatic presentation you created. Congratulations on the first place win!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 i appreciate your kind words. have a nice day.
Gypsy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal
This poem reminds us that ravens are dark colored literally and figuratively. They are black in color and are considered bad omens.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Hi MariVal
This poem reminds us that ravens are dark colored literally and figuratively. They are black in color and are considered bad omens.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
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Don't mention it, Marival.
Joan
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think you have a winner here, my friend. It's perfect. Ravens signify death and darkness, or a bad omen. Night always seem to be the time of horror, and this 2-4-2 adds to that feeling. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I think you have a winner here, my friend. It's perfect. Ravens signify death and darkness, or a bad omen. Night always seem to be the time of horror, and this 2-4-2 adds to that feeling. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! The "edge of night" makes something non-physical like "night" have some physical border! And the blackness of the raven fits with the blackness of the night. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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I like it! The "edge of night" makes something non-physical like "night" have some physical border! And the blackness of the raven fits with the blackness of the night. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love ❤️
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There is some mystery in this contest entry as to why the raven are perched on the edge of night. My mind is wanting to know more about that. That's a good place to leave your readers, wanting more. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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There is some mystery in this contest entry as to why the raven are perched on the edge of night. My mind is wanting to know more about that. That's a good place to leave your readers, wanting more. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dovemarie
Hi Gypsy, simple poem about ravens and how they're flying around as night approaches. They are as black as night. You always have good pictures from Pinterest. Dove
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Hi Gypsy, simple poem about ravens and how they're flying around as night approaches. They are as black as night. You always have good pictures from Pinterest. Dove
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very atmospheric and Poesque 2-4-2 verse with its haunting, otherworldly quality, ideally suited for the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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A very atmospheric and Poesque 2-4-2 verse with its haunting, otherworldly quality, ideally suited for the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool cool! i like ravens and crows
a great haiku about them
one typo - i think it's "perched on the edge"
one suggestion - maybe make it a 4-line haiku?
ravens
p e r c h e d
on the edge---
of night
just a couple thoughts...
still an excellent poem
thank you for sharing it!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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cool cool! i like ravens and crows
a great haiku about them
one typo - i think it's "perched on the edge"
one suggestion - maybe make it a 4-line haiku?
ravens
p e r c h e d
on the edge---
of night
just a couple thoughts...
still an excellent poem
thank you for sharing it!
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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It's for a 2/4/2 contest.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
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omg did not even notice it was for a contest!