For Mary Keane
Free verse3 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Very well written, it sounds like your family has come a long way in finding out where they want to be, and to make a home, your second stanza speaks of strength and determination, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Very well written, it sounds like your family has come a long way in finding out where they want to be, and to make a home, your second stanza speaks of strength and determination, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for the kind words
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great free form poem. It flows nicely from beginning to finish. I love how you talk about the generations as they cycle with time.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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This is a great free form poem. It flows nicely from beginning to finish. I love how you talk about the generations as they cycle with time.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, but I would suggest that you do one thing go back highlighted and make the font in a bold black color on the light gray or make the background white. One or the other, so it reads well for a person who has limited eyesight. Patricia.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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This is very well written, but I would suggest that you do one thing go back highlighted and make the font in a bold black color on the light gray or make the background white. One or the other, so it reads well for a person who has limited eyesight. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I didn't even think about that.
