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The Purifying Flame

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "For B"
Poems about the experience of healing.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Sunflowers are so tall, bright and magical and they do indeed follow the sun with their faithful heads. I enjoyed your descriptive words about these sunflowers, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024

Comment from DonandVicki
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I like this stanza in your poem, "What joy you bring to the world,
sunflower growing where dark swirled." A true tribute of yours to a good friend. Don

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

Comment from Sarah Probe S.
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how lovely, your poem is full of love and gratitude, it's true that when you have a real friend you trust, you have to cherish and show gratitude and your poignant Poem is full of purpose and gratification,
well done,
Sarah

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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very nice poem that you have written for a friend and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is raead aloud. Your presentation is very nice. Patricia

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.
Comment from Rick Gardner
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Shows the way to travel with peace, absorbing the life we are in, the life we were meant to have and show to others, Walk with joy, with love, with forgiveness. Walk with pride.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.
reply by Rick Gardner on 25-Nov-2024
    Sad to see you were in the hospital. Hope things are better. Continue what you are writing, definitively worth it.
reply by Rick Gardner on 25-Nov-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a wonderful poem about the sunflower. They are beautiful flowers that are easy to grow and fun to watch growing high above the other flowers.

We tried growing some last summer and they did well for awhile until the ants invaded them and destroyed them. I didn't want to use pesticide, because we wanted to roast the seeds. Better luck next summer.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 25-Nov-2024
    You're welcome and it's no big deal that it took you a minute to respond. Hope all is well in your world.

    Cecilia