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Comment from GWHARGIS
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Fictional crushes are the best. No pressure and no guilt. Lol. This was a beautiful poem, Gypsy. I especially liked the line about the warm breeze caressing his face. Really good. Gretchen

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from Wendy G
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Perhaps he is writing or thinking similar thoughts! Lol. It's a beautiful poem and has wistful tones of memories of romance and special moments. Beautifully expressed.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from kahpot
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Absolutely beautiful, words and feelings that one could get lost in, or chase and dream about, your first stanza is my favorite, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

Comment from royowen
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I guess the trouble with someone else's sensations, we can never really know what they feel, it's like pain, we can never really stand in someone else's shoes, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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I had to smile at your notes. You and MJ (Heather Knight) write about your faraway crushes! This one is very eloquently expressed and these sensations can make us wonder and intensify the longing.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister. All I have left are crushes... it's safer that way lol

    ❤️ Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
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yea... nz is quite far lol!

a great free verse for a crush poem
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

Comment from Regina Elliott
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Very ethereal and dreamy
poem, Gypsy Blue Rose.
Enchanting and romantic.
The artwork is hauntingly
beauteous. I hope your
Thursday morning dawns
inspirational. Blessings to
you.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Oh yes, I've just googled him:)) How could he forget you? This is such a beautifully tender verse, almost hypnotic in its gentle tone, wondering about a love from the past and a longing for a connection again. Love this! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024