Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Author,
Wonderful poem! I felt so distraught I actually did jump almost to my death. Badly injured, God said, "not yet!"
Your poem is a help to many of us who felt helpless and overwhelmed by life's sadness.
Good luck with this one.
Blessings,
Cindy
*recouperated, just a little worse for wear!*

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thanks, Cindy. Keep the Faith!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wish they would speak just a bit louder to many... well done here! :-) Wonderful entry for this limited form and best of luck to you in the competition! ;)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Many thanks.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-9, My Guardian Angel, has the proper formatting and may be telling the reader that the temptation to bypass the waiting in line was diverted by a divine presence. Nice.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Cheers, Bill.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There are emotions and feelings in your words. You say much in a short poem about the divine intervention of angels to save us from self destruction. Excellent faith based poem.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thank you.