Miracles
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Plenty going on at the Hideaway Bar and with Poppa and Tango on the outside, waiting, watching, impatient, I feel there's some drama still to go . Another good read, Carol.
well done,
cheers
valda
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Plenty going on at the Hideaway Bar and with Poppa and Tango on the outside, waiting, watching, impatient, I feel there's some drama still to go . Another good read, Carol.
well done,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from lyenochka
It's good that Tango and Poppa are a team because Tango is way too impatient and could get all of them into trouble. Good that Poppa called Garth. But I wish he'd let Eleanor talk when she has something urgent to share. Besides, he needed worry about keeping her safe and she's already dead. He doesn't know what a gold mine it is to have a ghost on his team.
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It's good that Tango and Poppa are a team because Tango is way too impatient and could get all of them into trouble. Good that Poppa called Garth. But I wish he'd let Eleanor talk when she has something urgent to share. Besides, he needed worry about keeping her safe and she's already dead. He doesn't know what a gold mine it is to have a ghost on his team.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Wendy G
So much happening at once. Eleanor does need to get to Garth, but tailing this German guy and finding confirmation of the links with Doyle, as well as the painting heist need to be sorted first. Well done. Very exciting.
Wendy
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So much happening at once. Eleanor does need to get to Garth, but tailing this German guy and finding confirmation of the links with Doyle, as well as the painting heist need to be sorted first. Well done. Very exciting.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
It's good that Tango was able to hear the conversation between Crystal and Bruiser about the artwork being worth so much money. Well, that's one way Eleanor can keep Garth away from seeing Matthew, by his running off to try to catch William. Another well-written chapter. Blessings. Carol
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It's good that Tango was able to hear the conversation between Crystal and Bruiser about the artwork being worth so much money. Well, that's one way Eleanor can keep Garth away from seeing Matthew, by his running off to try to catch William. Another well-written chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very good job of pulling a lot of strings together to form a picture that isn't worth a million dollars, but maybe it will explain a lot of what is going on and send the judge up for more years in prison. And you did this all while taking care of two or three girls, one ailing. You have a better ability to concentrate than I do.
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Very good job of pulling a lot of strings together to form a picture that isn't worth a million dollars, but maybe it will explain a lot of what is going on and send the judge up for more years in prison. And you did this all while taking care of two or three girls, one ailing. You have a better ability to concentrate than I do.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
But if Eleanor was allowed to get through Garth's thick head, they would all know where Matthew is. Things are really hotting up, Carol, talk about exciting!! Well done, dear friend, this is really good!! If you don't win this contest, I'll want to read the one that does to see if it deserves it!! Love you lots, Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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But if Eleanor was allowed to get through Garth's thick head, they would all know where Matthew is. Things are really hotting up, Carol, talk about exciting!! Well done, dear friend, this is really good!! If you don't win this contest, I'll want to read the one that does to see if it deserves it!! Love you lots, Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I just hope I can get the whole story in on time. It's going to be a rough one. And I don't want to short change the story. I did get this chapter done today and I'm started on the enxt. Quiet afternoon... The next one should be exciting if I can write it like I see it in my mind. Off I go...
Love you, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The action is heating up and I can't wait to read more. Eleanor was ready to tell Garth about Matthew, but other things were happening. This is going to be good.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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The action is heating up and I can't wait to read more. Eleanor was ready to tell Garth about Matthew, but other things were happening. This is going to be good.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Yes, he was focused on catching William, and Eleanor wanted to tell him about Matthew. Oh yeah, and then, of course, there is the situation about Allie, too. Our Cowboy has his hands full.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another stellar chapter of Miracles. This book is going to be a seller also. I am so excited for you. You are a very talented author and I can't wait for this book to go to the publisher. I will get a signed copy of this. I been bragging you up my friend. I am so proud of you. You've accomplished what you set out to do.
Love you my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another stellar chapter of Miracles. This book is going to be a seller also. I am so excited for you. You are a very talented author and I can't wait for this book to go to the publisher. I will get a signed copy of this. I been bragging you up my friend. I am so proud of you. You've accomplished what you set out to do.
Love you my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Oh you definitely put a big smile on my face with this one, dear. I am thrilled you are enjoying this one and I too can't wait to put Spirited Justice (the 2nd in the series) and this one in print. It's exciting!
Smiles, Carol
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Girlfriend I know it is. You have broke through a tough market and I'm proud of you for not giving up. I keep showing everyone your book. Hopefully, you will get more sales. Are you doing a book signing tour?
Love ya,
Cecilia
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I haven't the slightest idea how to market the book. I was just asking mu granddaughter the same question. LOL
Comment from Rick Gardner
We all suffer from the rules on books, seem to have to read chapters in the book, not the first chapters though. It is like eating the center of the cake or pie first, the eating the rest outward.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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We all suffer from the rules on books, seem to have to read chapters in the book, not the first chapters though. It is like eating the center of the cake or pie first, the eating the rest outward.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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If you are enjoying what you read, Rick, then I am blessed and happy. I write for others to enjoy my endeavors as much as I do writing them. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gayla putnam
It's a pretty good detective story. I love the description of the Hideway. I think I've been in that bar, with the scratched tables and the sticky floor. It's a great visual image with the neon signs blinking. One sentence didn't make sense. Crystal, "Now and then, she said, her voice barely audible. I didn't know what the now and then referred to. Also, I wonder if you shouldn't have Crystal introduce herself. Further down the story, she is talking to Bruiser, and I ask who that is. Minor comments in a good story. gayla
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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It's a pretty good detective story. I love the description of the Hideway. I think I've been in that bar, with the scratched tables and the sticky floor. It's a great visual image with the neon signs blinking. One sentence didn't make sense. Crystal, "Now and then, she said, her voice barely audible. I didn't know what the now and then referred to. Also, I wonder if you shouldn't have Crystal introduce herself. Further down the story, she is talking to Bruiser, and I ask who that is. Minor comments in a good story. gayla
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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These characters were introduced in earlier chapters so the reader might have already met them. Crystal is a bartender and Bruiser is the bouncer. He also abuses Crystal with his size and authority. His turn will come though in the end. Thanks for reading this chapter. I appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol