Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This sounds like you someone got rid of a bad husband in a divorce.
Interesting artwork. I like the mono-rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good rest of the week.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". There is a link to it on Amazon.com at the bottom of my profile bio page

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thanks I will have a look

reply by dragonpoet on 21-Nov-2024

My pleasure. If you decide to buy it, please let me know how you like it.
Joan

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

I' m not that bright, should there be eight element to compose this 1-6-1: viewing only seven in this presentation. I'm trying to learn those boundaries myself in these particular requests. They do seem fun: all stated in my opinion.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

There are 8 syllables which is correct. Thanks for your review

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

This is an excellent 1-6-1! You have managed to incorporate rhyme throughout on a very interesting and entertaining with a touch of humuor subject matter! I enjoyed this, well done. The image is amazing! Congrats court win!
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thanks Nicki for the great review