Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Miracles - Chap 15"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like the tactics they are using. This will draw the reader in He took a deep breath, forcing himself to maintain eye contact, knowing that clarity was crucial. "I need to tell you something important. "I just wish I knew where Eleanor disappeared to."
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"Miriam!" Eleanor approached the woman standing near the water's edge. "I sensed you wanted to talk to me." hopefully things will clarify
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I like the tactics they are using. This will draw the reader in He took a deep breath, forcing himself to maintain eye contact, knowing that clarity was crucial. "I need to tell you something important. "I just wish I knew where Eleanor disappeared to."
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"Miriam!" Eleanor approached the woman standing near the water's edge. "I sensed you wanted to talk to me." hopefully things will clarify
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading another chapter and leaving your thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
nice to come back to a story waiting for me, got the flu and it was really nasty, now I'm so far behind with everything I don't think I will ever catch up
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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nice to come back to a story waiting for me, got the flu and it was really nasty, now I'm so far behind with everything I don't think I will ever catch up
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy this chapter. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, I'm catching up, and will be reading the next chapters shortly. The story is really taking off and you leave us wondering what's what. I'm sure Eleanor will sought it out in the end. We'll see. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Hi Carol, I'm catching up, and will be reading the next chapters shortly. The story is really taking off and you leave us wondering what's what. I'm sure Eleanor will sought it out in the end. We'll see. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You are catching up and I am falling behind... This has been a trial this time, but tomorrow is it. Thanks as always,
Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
It's going to be even more devastating for Jenna to hear that Matthew can't remember anything about his life. But I think she will be relieved to hear he's OK. Another well written piece, Carol, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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It's going to be even more devastating for Jenna to hear that Matthew can't remember anything about his life. But I think she will be relieved to hear he's OK. Another well written piece, Carol, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Someone, please remind me where my brain was when I decided to write a story and visit my awesome great-granddaughters, who put the "Energizer Bunny" to shame with their activities and everything else. I'm trying to write, enjoy, review, enjoy, cook, enjoy, and clean. Oh yeah, did I mention I enjoy them as much as possible? It's been fun but a stretch for this old lady. Thanks so much for sticking with me. Forgive my tardiness.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
More than acceptable, Carol it was full of drama as they tried to work out just what happened to Donatelli's car, and even more critical, Donatelli. Well done, especially during your visit with your family.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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More than acceptable, Carol it was full of drama as they tried to work out just what happened to Donatelli's car, and even more critical, Donatelli. Well done, especially during your visit with your family.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Someone, please remind me where my brain was when I decided to write a story and visit my awesome great-granddaughters, who put the "Energizer Bunny" to shame with their activities and everything else. I'm trying to write, enjoy, review, enjoy, cook, enjoy, and clean. Oh yeah, did I mention I enjoy them as much as possible? It's been fun but a stretch for this old lady. Thanks so much for sticking with me. Forgive my tardiness.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter! Good dialogue between Miriam and Eleanor. It's good they are trusting each other now, and that Miriam will take Eleanor to see Matthew. Hopefully Garth will have a chance to set things right with Donatelli.
Enjoy your time with the great-grands. Blessings & hugs. Carol
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Great chapter! Good dialogue between Miriam and Eleanor. It's good they are trusting each other now, and that Miriam will take Eleanor to see Matthew. Hopefully Garth will have a chance to set things right with Donatelli.
Enjoy your time with the great-grands. Blessings & hugs. Carol
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Someone, please remind me where my brain was when I decided to write a story and visit my awesome great-granddaughters, who put the "Energizer Bunny" to shame with their activities and everything else. I'm trying to write, enjoy, review, enjoy, cook, enjoy, and clean. Oh yeah, did I mention I enjoy them as much as possible? It's been fun but a stretch for this old lady. Thanks so much for sticking with me. Forgive my tardiness.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You don't have to respond to every review. We know you're on vacation. Enjoy your time with your girls.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm sure you'll have no trouble keeping up with the three young girls and writing too. Keeping up with the girls is hard I'm sure, but writing words just seems to flow like bubbles from a Bubble Machine for you. I'm sure you're saying ha ha, as you work so hard. Have a wonderful trip!
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I'm sure you'll have no trouble keeping up with the three young girls and writing too. Keeping up with the girls is hard I'm sure, but writing words just seems to flow like bubbles from a Bubble Machine for you. I'm sure you're saying ha ha, as you work so hard. Have a wonderful trip!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Someone, please remind me where my brain was when I decided to write a story and visit my awesome great-granddaughters, who put the "Energizer Bunny" to shame with their activities and everything else. I'm trying to write, enjoy, review, enjoy, cook, enjoy, and clean. Oh yeah, did I mention I enjoy them as much as possible? It's been fun but a stretch for this old lady. Thanks so much for sticking with me. Forgive my tardiness.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Carol, I'm so sorry I late, I've been having eye problems, I couldn't see properly. I've had Graham helping me. I'm being booked in for an operation, laser, and it should all be done before Christmas.
But all my sixes are gone and you know I always love your chapters and always think they are worthy of a six. I don't even know where they went.
Graham has helped me read this chapter, and of course it's fabulous. I'm so glad Garth is there, and Miriam has told Eleanor that Matthew wants to see her. I'm lucky that I'm an old fashioned touch typist, so Graham just has to run his eye over this. Well done, and now we are going to read the next one! Virual six, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Hi Carol, I'm so sorry I late, I've been having eye problems, I couldn't see properly. I've had Graham helping me. I'm being booked in for an operation, laser, and it should all be done before Christmas.
But all my sixes are gone and you know I always love your chapters and always think they are worthy of a six. I don't even know where they went.
Graham has helped me read this chapter, and of course it's fabulous. I'm so glad Garth is there, and Miriam has told Eleanor that Matthew wants to see her. I'm lucky that I'm an old fashioned touch typist, so Graham just has to run his eye over this. Well done, and now we are going to read the next one! Virual six, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Never worry about the sixes, my sweet friend. And a big thank you to Graham for reading and I hope enjoying. Are you going to have cataract surgery or something else? Take care of yourself and don't worry about me.
Love you as always,
Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I'm glad Miriam is going to let Eleanor see him. Maybe she can help him remember. I'm sure Garth isn' going to want to be left behind. There is always someone in law enforcement who is crooked and working with the other side.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I'm glad Miriam is going to let Eleanor see him. Maybe she can help him remember. I'm sure Garth isn' going to want to be left behind. There is always someone in law enforcement who is crooked and working with the other side.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Unfortunately, you are right; Doyle has the money and power to sway many of them. I hope Garth figures it out.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
This chapter is great and stop apologising for having a family and commitments.
This is good and normal :p
I love the way this is developing.
Good job Carol
Tim x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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This chapter is great and stop apologising for having a family and commitments.
This is good and normal :p
I love the way this is developing.
Good job Carol
Tim x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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At home, my family forgets I exist and all l do is sit at my computer all day. It's wonderful, exhausting, and exhilarating to be around family that cares. Glad you enjoyed this chapter...I have to cram my typing into a short amount of time. Nana duties, you know.
Smiles, Carol