Pain
A 1-6-1 contest entry.2 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear poet, a strong and
excellent entry for the 1-6-1
competition. My very best wishes for you. I sympathize.
Years ago when my late husband, my daughter and I
lived in a trailer, I would get
migraines. We wound up
moving out of there and the
migraines stopped. I think the
old trailer had mold in it. Have
a cozy evening.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Dear poet, a strong and
excellent entry for the 1-6-1
competition. My very best wishes for you. I sympathize.
Years ago when my late husband, my daughter and I
lived in a trailer, I would get
migraines. We wound up
moving out of there and the
migraines stopped. I think the
old trailer had mold in it. Have
a cozy evening.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review. I really appreciate what you had to say in your words.
Comment from RodG
The Speaker appears to be suffering from great pain--possibly a migraine. These 1-6-1 poems are much more challenging than they look. I'm sorry but what you are saying in your last line seems implausible for this guy.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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The Speaker appears to be suffering from great pain--possibly a migraine. These 1-6-1 poems are much more challenging than they look. I'm sorry but what you are saying in your last line seems implausible for this guy.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Perhaps you are right about the last line. I do appreciate your review and comments. Thank you.