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Today in One Hundred Words

a 100-word story

5 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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Unfortunately that is as much as one can handle, when one is a carer for someone who needs dialysis, or is ill in other ways. It's an exhausting routine. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Wendy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This slice-of-life story in 100 words points out that aging and caretaking may lead to more of a pattern that persists day in and day out. Once in a while my mother and I fall asleep in front of the TV, too. This story fits the writing prompt well.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Thanks for giving this a look, CC.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These routines have become the norm in old age and it sounds like you are a huge support to your wife. Thank you for sharing a snippet of your life here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from NanaGaye
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A very interesting read which I guess is more fact than fiction. You sound like a very loving and caring person who deserves a six star rating. Image from Google is ideal

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
    Thank you, NanaGaye. I changed its description to nonfiction.
reply by NanaGaye on 18-Nov-2024
    Cheers
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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What a great story. Your day sounds as exciting as mine, since I don't work anymore. You are a good husband for helping your wife with her care.


Great job and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Cecilia
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 18-Nov-2024
    You're welcome

    Cecilia