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Holding On

A gentle reminder led to this

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Comment from Senyai
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Hello Anonymous,

What a beautiful supplication you've written. Your humble voice, your plea for strength touched me as I ask this every night. Rhyme scheme chosen adds much to this plea for strength and restoration.

All the best,
Senyai

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
    Hello Senyai. Thank you for your encouraging review. Yours, among others, have comforted me.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Sometimes it seems those Locust will never leave... Job can testify to that... But hope must always be our steadfast anchor believing that he can turn even the lost back to him... keep praying! :) Well written! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
    Thank you for your comfort, your wisdom, and the review itself. God had His hand in this, too.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a beautiful nighttime prayer that you have come up with. it rhymes nicely. It flows nicely from the very start to finish. God is good. He knows we are sinners and struggle every day with the devil. He is always there for us.


Cecilia

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the reminder Cecillia and of course your review.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 17-Nov-2024
    You're welcome

    Cecilia