Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

That guy has got to be getting up there in years... wonder how he keeps his joints happy...lol! :) Great Lune for the contest here -- thanx for sharing! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Yes, so I've heard he's a legend. Maybe he uses moisturizer for his skin and Fish oil for his joints. Either way, thank you for taking the time to review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This one gave me a chuckle. It's much more light-hearted than any of the other pieces I've read for this competition. The prancing as a play on Prancer is nice too.

All syllables present and correct.

Good luck to you
GMG

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thank you so much, I took that picture going into the lobby where we were staying last night, so when I saw the contest, this is what I came up with.

Comment from NanaGaye

Excellent

Ho Ho Ho very appropriate for this time of the year. Great picture choice.
I like the centered text but thought it would stand out better in white, just a suggestion Good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thank you so much for reviewing this, and your suggestion. I originally wanted red and green just because that's a standard "Christmas" combination, but yes, I think the white looks better and it pops more.