Literary Divination
Aaaah, what magic can be found there . . .10 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I enjoyed the rather haunting tone of this verse. Your assiduous selection of words perfectly fits the olde worlde feel of the visual, complete with pleasing flow and alliteration. My favourite! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed the rather haunting tone of this verse. Your assiduous selection of words perfectly fits the olde worlde feel of the visual, complete with pleasing flow and alliteration. My favourite! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thanx so much for the thoughtful and positive review here, Debbie -- good to hear from you, my lady! ;)
Comment from zanya
Excellent use of language here in this short format, Lune poem. Language is the 'attire' really that the poem wears on presentation to the reader, and a super pic to illustrate.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Excellent use of language here in this short format, Lune poem. Language is the 'attire' really that the poem wears on presentation to the reader, and a super pic to illustrate.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the review, zanya, although I am not sure I at all understand it... there is nothing of 'attire' or 'wearing' in the wording of the Lune. It must have been a 'cut and paste' from another review... Have a good day.
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune, Literary Divination, has the proper formatting and suggests that the powers that inform the writers' minds flow in from the far corners and take the route through the pen. Neat.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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This lune, Literary Divination, has the proper formatting and suggests that the powers that inform the writers' minds flow in from the far corners and take the route through the pen. Neat.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from F. William Lester
Well done. I like the thought of fantasies and conception's quill. A great visual. The same thought could be attributed to any story, fiction, or nonfiction, where the writer's thoughts flow from the wellspring of their imagination through the pen they hold onto the paper before them, forming the words that tell their story. Nice work. Thanks for sharing it. Be well.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Well done. I like the thought of fantasies and conception's quill. A great visual. The same thought could be attributed to any story, fiction, or nonfiction, where the writer's thoughts flow from the wellspring of their imagination through the pen they hold onto the paper before them, forming the words that tell their story. Nice work. Thanks for sharing it. Be well.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Zach Gallows
Simply magnificent. Succinctly sums up all the possibilities that linger on the tip of the quill. What worlds await on that blank piece of paper. It really is like a kind of magic, being able to create in such a way.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Simply magnificent. Succinctly sums up all the possibilities that linger on the tip of the quill. What worlds await on that blank piece of paper. It really is like a kind of magic, being able to create in such a way.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review, Zach!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece very much.
Not only is the lune a condensed haiku (according to the description), you've condensed a great ethereal thought down into the required syllables without it feeling wrangled or short-changed.
Very nice
GMG
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Hi there,
I liked this piece very much.
Not only is the lune a condensed haiku (according to the description), you've condensed a great ethereal thought down into the required syllables without it feeling wrangled or short-changed.
Very nice
GMG
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for the thoughtful and insightful review - much appreciated!!
Comment from ESOSTINE
This poem speaks of how imaginations of a writer gather together and flow down on paper through the quill. Well done, my friend for this beautiful piece with a complimenting photo. Regards
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This poem speaks of how imaginations of a writer gather together and flow down on paper through the quill. Well done, my friend for this beautiful piece with a complimenting photo. Regards
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your review!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our understanding of events mixed with fantasy can tell a story that others find interesting if we let our imagination free to roam, I enjoyed your skilful words here for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Our understanding of events mixed with fantasy can tell a story that others find interesting if we let our imagination free to roam, I enjoyed your skilful words here for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt. I could use some of that literary divination right now. The ideas are taking their sweet time to get to my fingertips! Nicely written.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt. I could use some of that literary divination right now. The ideas are taking their sweet time to get to my fingertips! Nicely written.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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lol! Thank you for the cheerful review!
Comment from DonandVicki
I have never written a Lune before and had no idea that it was a condensed haiku. I didn't think a haiku could be condensed any further. But you did a good job condensing this lune.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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I have never written a Lune before and had no idea that it was a condensed haiku. I didn't think a haiku could be condensed any further. But you did a good job condensing this lune.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Try one! Thank you for your review.