Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 2 votes.

Too early to post about Christmas and anyway your stunning artwork choice drew me in.

Wrapped in his arms watching the stars twinkle .. sounds very romantic.

Since I was a kid I loved to watch the stars so my grandfather bought me an amateur telescope. ( biggrin)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thanks for your support for my contest entry. Honestly, the artwork is better than my poem at romance.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, to be young again to dance and shimmer in those lights... in those nights... wink, wink! ;) A great employment of the Lune for the contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Get your dancing shoes on! Thanks for your wishes.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is romantic and full of passion and we still rely on the stars to give us good wishes and I enjoyed the loving sentiments in this magical poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Thanks for your interpretation Dolly! It was identical to my thought processes. The illustration is truly spectacular IMHO and elevates my overall presentation.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I love how you've shared such a peaceful (almost magical) moment in just a few lines. The word choices including "dancing lights" and "shimmer in the night" are perfect. The phrase "stargazers in love" perfectly sets the mood. It feels like a celebration of being in love and the beauty of the night sky. Lovely work!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Good analysis of my poem Michael! Glad it resonates with you.