Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Absolutely love the fun recollections here and the personal warmth the memories bring -- well done! ; Thank you so much for sharing your pen and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

This one was so much fun to write and Rockwell deserves all the credit. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I love how your poem shares the sweetness of puppy love. The huge moon adds a dreamlike quality. This really hits the heart. It feels like a moment frozen in time - innocent, yet important. It made me smile thinking about how love - even young love - leaves such a lasting impression. Beautiful!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Oh, you said it, Michael. Even young love leaves a lasting impression. I am so pleased my short poem got that impression across. Thanks for sharing.

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

Hi Mystery Writer,

So cute! Your picture complements your words beautifully. I like that the girl has a name, the moon is huge, and the image of innocence is painted with the first "puppy love." Well done!

Patricia

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Thank you so much, Patricia. Glad you like it.