Last Round
a 5-7-53 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, that one hits way too close to home for some... we lose too many to suicide these days... Thank you for bringing their plight to the forefront... Best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Oh, that one hits way too close to home for some... we lose too many to suicide these days... Thank you for bringing their plight to the forefront... Best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Yvette
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! The way you shared the soldier and his gun - with one round expended - shares such a feeling of finality. You capture a moment of loss. There's no need for more words. I could feel the emotions of what's left unsaid.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Nicely done! The way you shared the soldier and his gun - with one round expended - shares such a feeling of finality. You capture a moment of loss. There's no need for more words. I could feel the emotions of what's left unsaid.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Michael
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. The words are powerful and leaves the reader to their come up with their own conclusions. The picture you chose is powerful too. It compliments the poem nicely.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This is a great 5-7-5 poem. The words are powerful and leaves the reader to their come up with their own conclusions. The picture you chose is powerful too. It compliments the poem nicely.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia
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You're welcome.
Cecilia