Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A wonderful employment of this short form: a love letter to a sweetheart! ;) Thank you so much for sharing your pen and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing and for your good luck wishes!

Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

KatieMae,

When you find the chosen one, nothing stands in your way, even if you are only 4-7 years old (-: As it often happens in life, those first encounters may last a lifetime.

Such a cute and darling picture complements your well-written 5-7-5 poem.

Mark

P.S. IMHO ... for the future, adding a dash or squiggle after your middle line would emphasize your (terrific) closing phrase.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Mark for your wonderful comments and stellar review. Yes, I'll put that squiggly line in. I usually do.

Comment from Patrick Bernardy

Excellent

Hello!

This is a very adorable short verse about the power of soul-mates. And the picture is well chosen as well, being equally adorable. Good luck in the contest!

Patrick

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Thanks so much Patrick for your review and good luck wishes!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

How cute and beautiful, to imagine that love could start and hold at such a young age, I am sure it often has, an excellent 5-7-5 poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much kahpot for your lovely comments and review!