Sunset Love
Bathed in amber twilight's glow5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
That is what is said, isn't -- a very positive and uplifting contest entry!! Thank you so much for sharing your pen and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
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That is what is said, isn't -- a very positive and uplifting contest entry!! Thank you so much for sharing your pen and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
Comment from zanya
Yes a tribute to love here in this short format poem - love as it blossoms in later years still with fire at its heart as per the final line and a great pic to illustrate
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Yes a tribute to love here in this short format poem - love as it blossoms in later years still with fire at its heart as per the final line and a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
A lovely sentiment expressed in this contest entry.
Couples celebrating their golden years, but their fires still burn.
A terrific image to complement your verse.
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A lovely sentiment expressed in this contest entry.
Couples celebrating their golden years, but their fires still burn.
A terrific image to complement your verse.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
This is so beautiful, you captured the feeling of love so strongly in this short poem. 5-7-5s can be tricky when you have such little words to work with, you haven't wasted one syllable, it's really lovely.good luck woth the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
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This is so beautiful, you captured the feeling of love so strongly in this short poem. 5-7-5s can be tricky when you have such little words to work with, you haven't wasted one syllable, it's really lovely.good luck woth the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The spark of love can slowly burn for decades and never fade, finding our soul mate can be the luck of the draw, I enjoyed your uplifting romantic words, love Dolly x
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The spark of love can slowly burn for decades and never fade, finding our soul mate can be the luck of the draw, I enjoyed your uplifting romantic words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024