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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Marival
These are very colorful tankas that describe the transition from night into day. You chose good artwork. I like the personification of dew
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Hi Marival
These are very colorful tankas that describe the transition from night into day. You chose good artwork. I like the personification of dew
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
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You are most kindly welcome. MariVal
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am wondering what is going on that needs to hide behind Daylight. It's hard to do but not impossible. Once again, your poem and presentation are perfect.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I am wondering what is going on that needs to hide behind Daylight. It's hard to do but not impossible. Once again, your poem and presentation are perfect.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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It's personification of dawn and creates a visual imagery. It's emotions not to be taken literally.
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Bill Schott
This double tanka, Dawn Dewdrops, has the proper formatting and allows that the morning is always glorious, even though it is blocked by the occasional clouds.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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This double tanka, Dawn Dewdrops, has the proper formatting and allows that the morning is always glorious, even though it is blocked by the occasional clouds.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Damn, Gypsy, this made me stop and pause. It was quite moving and I love how in sync i felt with the dawn. There is something about those transitional moments during the day. I really felt this one. It was excellent but I'm out of sixes. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Damn, Gypsy, this made me stop and pause. It was quite moving and I love how in sync i felt with the dawn. There is something about those transitional moments during the day. I really felt this one. It was excellent but I'm out of sixes. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
It's pretty hard to hide in the daylight, and so things have found away to do it, but the night can certainly hide the blemishes on our skiing, and age betrays us, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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It's pretty hard to hide in the daylight, and so things have found away to do it, but the night can certainly hide the blemishes on our skiing, and age betrays us, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from EeanBlack
I love the last stanza. I hope it's called a stanza, I'm not sure. I like that it doesn't rhyme. I think it's more beautiful that way. I may ruffle feathers, but I think you are probably the most talented poet here. I know you hear that all the time, but I've read so many of your poems, which always elicit strong feelings. Thanks.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I love the last stanza. I hope it's called a stanza, I'm not sure. I like that it doesn't rhyme. I think it's more beautiful that way. I may ruffle feathers, but I think you are probably the most talented poet here. I know you hear that all the time, but I've read so many of your poems, which always elicit strong feelings. Thanks.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Eean, I'm happy you like it and free verse is one of my favorite forms. I also love Japanese poetry which is always free verse but with rules of syllables count and strong imagery.
These paire of stanzas are a Japanese poetic form called Tanka. If you are interested to learn, I have a club.
Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
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I thank you just to read. I'm in two clubs already and can't find time to write for them.
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I didn't ask you to join, just to let you know what's available.
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I know that.
Comment from Nicki.B
Stunning words, I love this it had a musical and magical tone to it. The first line is my favourite, what a wonderful way to describe dew drops. Beautiful presentation and colour and images to compliment to stunning words.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Stunning words, I love this it had a musical and magical tone to it. The first line is my favourite, what a wonderful way to describe dew drops. Beautiful presentation and colour and images to compliment to stunning words.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from BethShelby
I like your words and the personification of the dawn crying as the clouds hide the moon and stars. You illustrate and present your poetry in such a beautiful way.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I like your words and the personification of the dawn crying as the clouds hide the moon and stars. You illustrate and present your poetry in such a beautiful way.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from BethShelby
I like your words and the personification of the dawn crying as the clouds hide the moon and stars. You illustrate and present your poetry in such a beautiful way.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I like your words and the personification of the dawn crying as the clouds hide the moon and stars. You illustrate and present your poetry in such a beautiful way.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
A beautiful Tanka. I really like the "dawn that cries...grief, giving your poem a sad, yet lovely personification.
A wonderful poem, Gypsy.
Beautifully written.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Gypsy,
A beautiful Tanka. I really like the "dawn that cries...grief, giving your poem a sad, yet lovely personification.
A wonderful poem, Gypsy.
Beautifully written.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Have a great day!
Gypsy hugs