Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Unwanted Confessions"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa. This is brutal. But you portrayed it with panache and aplomb and understanding. We all make mistakes, and even though this one is especially tragic, it doesn't change how I feel about Mitch - that he's one of the good ones of life. Well done, Gretchen. xoxox
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Whoa. This is brutal. But you portrayed it with panache and aplomb and understanding. We all make mistakes, and even though this one is especially tragic, it doesn't change how I feel about Mitch - that he's one of the good ones of life. Well done, Gretchen. xoxox
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Funny thing about this, I've written Marshall's story. I finished a book about him . I was planning on posting it next year. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great story, if sad. The descriptive words you use pull your reader into the story as if they were sitting back observing everything.
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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This is a great story, if sad. The descriptive words you use pull your reader into the story as if they were sitting back observing everything.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. Gretchen
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You're welcome
Cecilia
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Jim Wile
That was indeed a sad story. Hard to imagine why a guy like Marshall, who was such a good guy in high school, changed so much and became an abusive drunk. Likely he was also abused, but Mitch didn't know about it.
It's bad enough when they take their frustrations and inadequacies out on their spouse, but on a little kid? There's a place in hell reserved for monsters like that.
And now I would worry about that boy's kid and how the abuse might be perpetuated. I do feel sorry for Mitch and can understand his guilt in not doing something when he could.
This was a well-written but heartbreaking chapter, Gretchen.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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That was indeed a sad story. Hard to imagine why a guy like Marshall, who was such a good guy in high school, changed so much and became an abusive drunk. Likely he was also abused, but Mitch didn't know about it.
It's bad enough when they take their frustrations and inadequacies out on their spouse, but on a little kid? There's a place in hell reserved for monsters like that.
And now I would worry about that boy's kid and how the abuse might be perpetuated. I do feel sorry for Mitch and can understand his guilt in not doing something when he could.
This was a well-written but heartbreaking chapter, Gretchen.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. Marshall's son broke the cycle. Thankfully. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
Oh That is so sad .Children remeber such things especially things that hurt them .Miranda's relationship with Mitch seems very steady .WAylon still with her.. hope his father wont trouble her again..
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Oh That is so sad .Children remeber such things especially things that hurt them .Miranda's relationship with Mitch seems very steady .WAylon still with her.. hope his father wont trouble her again..
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
So, so sad. I just can't understand people who beat their kids senseless, mind you the boy should know that Mitch meant well, but of course hatred doesn't reason, and unless he forgives Mitch, the monster in the room remains, beautifully written Gretchen. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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So, so sad. I just can't understand people who beat their kids senseless, mind you the boy should know that Mitch meant well, but of course hatred doesn't reason, and unless he forgives Mitch, the monster in the room remains, beautifully written Gretchen. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed. Gretchen
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yep, Mitch has a ghost that will haunt him forever. I am betting this will come back later in this story. I really enjoy reading this.
But he had designs on one girl, her name wasJen. (was Jen)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Yep, Mitch has a ghost that will haunt him forever. I am betting this will come back later in this story. I really enjoy reading this.
But he had designs on one girl, her name wasJen. (was Jen)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Barbara. Appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
I imagine some think the friend he didn't stop for beating his kid up would be something Mitch might have regrets about. i wondering if there will be more in this book about the friend. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I imagine some think the friend he didn't stop for beating his kid up would be something Mitch might have regrets about. i wondering if there will be more in this book about the friend. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I have a manuscript about his friend that I will be posting soon. Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I bought that book, Gretchen, it was so sad. I can see why Mitch would be so upset. That it could be a true story also brings it home. This was a sad, but very well written chapter, capturing his emotions exactly how I would have imagined, and expected. It deserves a six, as do all your stories. I was giving them away without realising it on Sunday. Its been an emotional time for me, it was the first anniversay of my brothers death yesterday, and I've been a bit of a slobbering wreck. I'll be back in control soon.
I thought this chapter was exceptional, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I bought that book, Gretchen, it was so sad. I can see why Mitch would be so upset. That it could be a true story also brings it home. This was a sad, but very well written chapter, capturing his emotions exactly how I would have imagined, and expected. It deserves a six, as do all your stories. I was giving them away without realising it on Sunday. Its been an emotional time for me, it was the first anniversay of my brothers death yesterday, and I've been a bit of a slobbering wreck. I'll be back in control soon.
I thought this chapter was exceptional, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Anniversaries like that are tough. Sorry you had to go through that. Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Another interesting read. A bit of a diversion from your regular line. When are these two gonna get married? Just one small spag, this time around. her name was(space)Jen.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Another interesting read. A bit of a diversion from your regular line. When are these two gonna get married? Just one small spag, this time around. her name was(space)Jen.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate the editing help. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
That's probably the worst kind of ghost - the one that triggers guilt and deepest regrets. Poor Mitch wanted to believe the best in his friend but didn't know how much he really needed medical help mentally. A sad chapter. I wonder how Miranda will help Mitch with this.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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That's probably the worst kind of ghost - the one that triggers guilt and deepest regrets. Poor Mitch wanted to believe the best in his friend but didn't know how much he really needed medical help mentally. A sad chapter. I wonder how Miranda will help Mitch with this.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Hopefully, Mitch will learn to forgive himself. Thank you so much. Gretchen
