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Work ethis.3 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
because of them we human beings survive. I have read somewhere that of bee population becomes extinct ,that would be the end of human race too.. all the best
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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because of them we human beings survive. I have read somewhere that of bee population becomes extinct ,that would be the end of human race too.. all the best
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a sweet poem! I love how you capture beauty of nature in just a few lines. The connection between the bee and honey feels so natural. The last line, "Nature's hard worker" ties it all together perfectly! Keep it up - such a delightful little piece!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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This is such a sweet poem! I love how you capture beauty of nature in just a few lines. The connection between the bee and honey feels so natural. The last line, "Nature's hard worker" ties it all together perfectly! Keep it up - such a delightful little piece!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I appreciate your lovely review.
Comment from CM Pickard
This is an appealing poem because it meets the contest's criteria and leaves the reader satisfied. I do not think that changes are needed since it works.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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This is an appealing poem because it meets the contest's criteria and leaves the reader satisfied. I do not think that changes are needed since it works.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your lovely review.
