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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Quite a dark and almost morbid vision you've created here... although it almost makes the reader look away, they cannot help but read it through... your concluding line gives a little hope. Best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Quite a dark and almost morbid vision you've created here... although it almost makes the reader look away, they cannot help but read it through... your concluding line gives a little hope. Best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a powerful poem. So well written. The imagery of "radiation ungluing us" and "skin stripped away" creates a horrible image. But I think that makes your message even stronger. But I thought the call for change at the end gives the poem a hopeful conclusion. Very well done!
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This is such a powerful poem. So well written. The imagery of "radiation ungluing us" and "skin stripped away" creates a horrible image. But I think that makes your message even stronger. But I thought the call for change at the end gives the poem a hopeful conclusion. Very well done!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
