Knots
A 20-Syllable Poem14 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Wow! Patrick, a well deserved win with your 20 syllable beauty "Knots". It's simply a perfectly memorable little poem from its title, image chosen and the rhyming couplet. I love it!
All the best,
Senysi
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Wow! Patrick, a well deserved win with your 20 syllable beauty "Knots". It's simply a perfectly memorable little poem from its title, image chosen and the rhyming couplet. I love it!
All the best,
Senysi
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your comments and exceptional rating! I am very gratified that you like it! 😊
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Patrick
This is a good depiction of love in twenty syllables. Love is never free from pain. Nice artwork. It is probably why getting married is called 'tying the knot'.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Hi Patrick
This is a good depiction of love in twenty syllables. Love is never free from pain. Nice artwork. It is probably why getting married is called 'tying the knot'.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Joan! I am very happy you liked it! 😊
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My pleasure, Patrick.
Joan
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't read or write poetry and don't know the first thing about it. But I do stop to read it a little just to get an idea of what poets are trying to do. Congratulations on your blue ribbon!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I don't read or write poetry and don't know the first thing about it. But I do stop to read it a little just to get an idea of what poets are trying to do. Congratulations on your blue ribbon!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Ric! I appreciate you, homie! I got you on deck for a new Port Raid coming soon! Talk to you then (if not sooner!) Have a great weekend!
Comment from DonandVicki
Congratulations on your first place win, well deserved. We all have those tangled knots in our lives. Yin and Yang, love and passion. Very well composed. Don
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Congratulations on your first place win, well deserved. We all have those tangled knots in our lives. Yin and Yang, love and passion. Very well composed. Don
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Don! I'm glad you liked it, my friend. 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hey, congratulations! How did I miss this one? The simplicity and monotone of the visual is perfect to complement such a beautifully expressed 20 syllable verse. Almost Shakespearean in its romantic tone, every word is assiduously selected to convey your theme with impact and emotion. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Hey, congratulations! How did I miss this one? The simplicity and monotone of the visual is perfect to complement such a beautifully expressed 20 syllable verse. Almost Shakespearean in its romantic tone, every word is assiduously selected to convey your theme with impact and emotion. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Debbie! I appreciate your words very much! 😊
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from karenina
Your twenty syllables are so much more than the sum of its parts. I don't often see both short and rhyming poems from you...like me you tend to put more meat on the bone.
(smile)
The brevity here works so well.
There is pain, there is passion... and far too often the two become entangle, never to live without the other!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Your twenty syllables are so much more than the sum of its parts. I don't often see both short and rhyming poems from you...like me you tend to put more meat on the bone.
(smile)
The brevity here works so well.
There is pain, there is passion... and far too often the two become entangle, never to live without the other!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Hi Karenina! Thank you for visiting my short poem. I tend to shy away from them, as you said, but I need more member dollars, and these contests are always available. I figure I can increase my odds in the shortest amount of time, right? Art is one thing, but sometimes we must consider economics. 😂
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For sure! Member Dollars are everything here. One reason I NEVER spend real money to by FS currency!
Comment from jim vecchio
A very lovely use of wo syllables sure to win over the reviewer's hearts. Having been in pain today due to an ailment, I'll tell you passion is better. O look forward to more of your poetry,
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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A very lovely use of wo syllables sure to win over the reviewer's hearts. Having been in pain today due to an ailment, I'll tell you passion is better. O look forward to more of your poetry,
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Jim! This cracked me up! 🤣
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a nice poem. It is short and sweet, but those four lines say a lot. The picture is a nice visual and helps make the poem speak louder.
Great job
Keep them coming
Cecilia
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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This is a nice poem. It is short and sweet, but those four lines say a lot. The picture is a nice visual and helps make the poem speak louder.
Great job
Keep them coming
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Hello Cecilia! Thank you for dropping by! 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my!! I never thought about it that way but it's so true, pain and passion can tie our hearts into knots. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Oh my!! I never thought about it that way but it's so true, pain and passion can tie our hearts into knots. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Barbara! 😊