Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Lovely picture. You do not mention in your author's notes where it came from. The poetry is good and crisp. Good luck in the contest. I love Autumn too. It has always been my favorite season. Karen

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thanks for the read and review. Sincerely appreciated.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 10-Nov-2024

:-)

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Harry,

Nice rhyme scheme for this contest entry. You chose a good illustration to pair with your verse.

First line phrase is most descriptive for this season.

Mark

P.S. Not quite sure a comma is needed in the construction/meaning of your last line.

Could include a dash or squiggle after middle and then edit to:

Thank God for Nature's delight

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thanks for the suggestion, will implement.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A delightful Autumnal post full of nature's seasonal gold here Harry and I enjoyed your fine words for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x x x x x

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

A sincere thank you for your review. xxxxx

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

This is a beautiful autumn poem. I used to live in New England where the leaf colors are amazing. I like that you thanked God--what brilliance that he thought to take leaves dying and falling off a tree and turn it into a stunning event!
Nicely crafted!
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

A sincere thank you for your read and review.