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Three Things You Can't Avoid

There are three things in life now that you can't avoid

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Comment from karenina
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I grew up on Spam and eggs and escaped it as an adult. Now the other
spam clogs my inbox instead of my arteries...

(Both contribute to hypertension)

Cute!

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Karenina.
reply by karenina on 02-Dec-2024
    Welcome!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I love the humor in your poem! You've got a clever twist on the classic saying, and the way you've added "spam" was so creative. The rhythm works really well. I can't help but smile at the way you've captured a little modern frustration. It's playful and fun - great job! Keep it up!



 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Many thanks, Michael.
Comment from mermaids
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I remember occasionally eating Spam for dinner as a kid. Your words are humorous and you also bring to mind the spam emails that we all receive. Excellent use of twenty syllables in a poem. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024