Remembrance
20 syllables4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Amen! We should never forget those who served. We enjoy our freedoms because of them. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
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Amen! We should never forget those who served. We enjoy our freedoms because of them. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Well done! Your poem feels so thoughtful. I love how it gets straight to the heart of remembering those who served without needing a lot of words. Beautifully done!
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Well done! Your poem feels so thoughtful. I love how it gets straight to the heart of remembering those who served without needing a lot of words. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our remembrance Sunday is sacred and we where our poppies with pride and never forget those who have fought for their country, I enjoyed your poignant words here, love Dolly x
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Our remembrance Sunday is sacred and we where our poppies with pride and never forget those who have fought for their country, I enjoyed your poignant words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
Comment from CM Pickard
Very fitting for the subject, you may want to check the syllables though if you want it for the contest? I count 21 (might be wrong) I think it's an easy change, maybe the first line 'memorial crosses line the streets'?
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Very fitting for the subject, you may want to check the syllables though if you want it for the contest? I count 21 (might be wrong) I think it's an easy change, maybe the first line 'memorial crosses line the streets'?
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Whoops, my bad! Thank you for counting accurately. Now fixed.
Geoff