Time is racing by
Where has the time gone7 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 20Syllable Poem contest. I relate too well to this poem's message. Who's fast forwarding indeed?! Every summer seems to disappear faster and faster. Nicely done/ Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 20Syllable Poem contest. I relate too well to this poem's message. Who's fast forwarding indeed?! Every summer seems to disappear faster and faster. Nicely done/ Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Many thanks Marilyn.
Comment from patcelaw
There is one time in the year what I would like to fast forward and that time is from the start of summer, which is usually May to the end of July or August because it is so darn hot here. I enjoyed your 20 syllable appointment and I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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There is one time in the year what I would like to fast forward and that time is from the start of summer, which is usually May to the end of July or August because it is so darn hot here. I enjoyed your 20 syllable appointment and I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I agree with you here Jen, why are the seasons whizzing by so quickly and winter always seems to be the longest season! Roll on spring when we can start afresh, much enjoyed Jen, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I agree with you here Jen, why are the seasons whizzing by so quickly and winter always seems to be the longest season! Roll on spring when we can start afresh, much enjoyed Jen, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The transition from summer to winter feels almost jarring! And your question "Who's fast forwarding?" is perfect. I love how you share a sense of bewilderment and wonder at how fast time can fly. Great job capturing that feeling of seasons slipping away!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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The transition from summer to winter feels almost jarring! And your question "Who's fast forwarding?" is perfect. I love how you share a sense of bewilderment and wonder at how fast time can fly. Great job capturing that feeling of seasons slipping away!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much Michael.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, it won't be long and it will be winter for almost every one of us, but for you, it never really gets cold, or too cold I mean. I don't guess it lasts too long. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Yes, it won't be long and it will be winter for almost every one of us, but for you, it never really gets cold, or too cold I mean. I don't guess it lasts too long. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thanks Ric my friend X
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Hi Jeni,
This is a fabulous poem. It makes a huge statement and is spot on. It seems as we get older the time also moves faster. It's crazy how that is. Perhaps as children we didn't have a grasp on time. We have our whole life's ahead of us. Crazy how that works.
Great job.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Hi Jeni,
This is a fabulous poem. It makes a huge statement and is spot on. It seems as we get older the time also moves faster. It's crazy how that is. Perhaps as children we didn't have a grasp on time. We have our whole life's ahead of us. Crazy how that works.
Great job.
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the great review
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You're welcome
Comment from RodG
The seasons this year have flown by as you have pointed out in this short poem. The Speaker sounds wistful and at the same time disapproving. One small error. Way TOO soon.
Rod
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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The seasons this year have flown by as you have pointed out in this short poem. The Speaker sounds wistful and at the same time disapproving. One small error. Way TOO soon.
Rod
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thanks Rod