Unspoken Thoughts
Heed caution of your thoughts and words3 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-You have used your 20 syllables well
with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and comparison of
unspoken thoughts to sharp knives.
-You make a good point about
what these sharp words are capable of doing.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-You have used your 20 syllables well
with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and comparison of
unspoken thoughts to sharp knives.
-You make a good point about
what these sharp words are capable of doing.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the feedback, Pam!
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You are welcome, Coren.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our thoughts, when put into words can indeed hurt. If we we contain our thoughts, we can prevent this pain, a poignant post for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Our thoughts, when put into words can indeed hurt. If we we contain our thoughts, we can prevent this pain, a poignant post for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I just feel like thoughts can not truly be hidden. I see your point though. I'll have to think on it some more. Thanks for the comment and review!
Comment from CM Pickard
This is a very effective approach that stays within the 20-syllable format set for the contest. I don't see anything that needs changing as it works well as is. Good luck
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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This is a very effective approach that stays within the 20-syllable format set for the contest. I don't see anything that needs changing as it works well as is. Good luck
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thanks, CM!