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Lune Poetry Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
I was one of the ones that needed training from God, Thank you for this cute post with a good message. God is willing to "Tame" us all, but we must be willing.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I was one of the ones that needed training from God, Thank you for this cute post with a good message. God is willing to "Tame" us all, but we must be willing.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Absolutely! I'm not sure God is yet finished in "Taming" me. As always, I appreciate the review. John
Comment from T B Botts
Hello John,
I loved the picture. I'm not sure I understand the meaning of the poem. I think most of us are motivated by the same things, but somehow things get all twisted up and we start viewing our differences as problems instead of assets. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Hello John,
I loved the picture. I'm not sure I understand the meaning of the poem. I think most of us are motivated by the same things, but somehow things get all twisted up and we start viewing our differences as problems instead of assets. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Yep, I have a problem with the poem too, Tom. My thinking was much more shallow than your indepth review, I was just thinking there's one in every crowd. I've made a change, hopefully for the better. Appreciate the review.
John
Comment from Nicki.B
How cute is that picture! First time I've come across a Lune poem! Not many words to work with here, but you used yours great, love the humour in this gave me good old giggle. Good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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How cute is that picture! First time I've come across a Lune poem! Not many words to work with here, but you used yours great, love the humour in this gave me good old giggle. Good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Nicki. Your review made me smile. This was a fun little poem to write. The picture told me it had something to say, and I couldn't resist. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish.
John
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It really did ! Love it. Have a lovely weekend !
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Same to you. Blessings!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes and now we are all different, I enjoyed your musing here John and wish you luck with the contest, I was entertained with your humour here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Yes and now we are all different, I enjoyed your musing here John and wish you luck with the contest, I was entertained with your humour here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. Some things you just can't let go by without a comment, and this was one of those things. I appreciate your review and good luck wish. John
