Tatty Bogle
The warlock*s revenge3 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
EEK! That's a nasty one (as is intended, I'm sure). I really need to brush up on some of the exact rules for poetry forms, but I THINK this one is correct. There's a particularly nice (!) irony that some of the children Tatty plans to off are his own.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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EEK! That's a nasty one (as is intended, I'm sure). I really need to brush up on some of the exact rules for poetry forms, but I THINK this one is correct. There's a particularly nice (!) irony that some of the children Tatty plans to off are his own.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Oh, yes. Double yum! Thanks, Sallyo.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem really pulls you in with its haunting tone. I love the tension between the bogle's desire for revenge and the sense of justice it feels for its torment. The way you twist the idea of "witchcraft" and "cursed" is so clever! The underlying menace really makes this poem unforgettable. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Your poem really pulls you in with its haunting tone. I love the tension between the bogle's desire for revenge and the sense of justice it feels for its torment. The way you twist the idea of "witchcraft" and "cursed" is so clever! The underlying menace really makes this poem unforgettable. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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You are the king of reviewers. Thanks.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
wow... okay, so that's a seriously 'haunted' (demented?) piece about a sorcerer (yes, scarecrow...) that has a hellish bent -- again: wow. A great offering for this contest here - thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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wow... okay, so that's a seriously 'haunted' (demented?) piece about a sorcerer (yes, scarecrow...) that has a hellish bent -- again: wow. A great offering for this contest here - thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Best wishes.