Prophecy
From the Bible and Nostradamus11 total reviews
Comment from samandlancelot
Hi Aussie,
I enjoyed the symbolism throughout your prophesying poem. I like how the nations change their stance as Yahweh (Jesus) comes to bring peace. I especially liked it when the "Eagle retracts his sharp claws."
I wonder why you picked Rome as the venue as if that is where Jesus will return. Acts 1:9-12 shows he will return to the same location he left: the Mount of Olives, in East Jerusalem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Aussie,
I enjoyed the symbolism throughout your prophesying poem. I like how the nations change their stance as Yahweh (Jesus) comes to bring peace. I especially liked it when the "Eagle retracts his sharp claws."
I wonder why you picked Rome as the venue as if that is where Jesus will return. Acts 1:9-12 shows he will return to the same location he left: the Mount of Olives, in East Jerusalem.
Patricia
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hello Patricia, Based on the quatrains of Nostradamus (who had to use coded messages) otherwise he would have lost his life as a heretic. From memory, he used the animals to represent the Super Powers. Rome was mentioned in the Bible. Thank you and Happy Christmas. K XX
Comment from Beejay
What a powerful piece of work. The way you have woven hope into your words is especially powerful, as it evokes such an emotion within me.
I am so pleased I chose to review it, thank you.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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What a powerful piece of work. The way you have woven hope into your words is especially powerful, as it evokes such an emotion within me.
I am so pleased I chose to review it, thank you.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hello BeeJay, Many thanks for your positive review. Glad you enjoyed. Happy Christmas. K XX
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your free-form poem, drawing inspiration from the prophecies of the Bible and Nostradamus, offers a dramatic and symbolic narrative that resonates with themes of conflict, leadership, and divine intervention. The imagery you employ is vivid and thought-provoking, painting a picture of a world in turmoil and the potential for peace through divine guidance.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Your free-form poem, drawing inspiration from the prophecies of the Bible and Nostradamus, offers a dramatic and symbolic narrative that resonates with themes of conflict, leadership, and divine intervention. The imagery you employ is vivid and thought-provoking, painting a picture of a world in turmoil and the potential for peace through divine guidance.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Peter, Many thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. Happy Christmas, K xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The fight for countries to become powerful and be mighty, they take on the image of those powerful animals and birds and it is quite amusing really. I enjoyed the sentiment here and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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The fight for countries to become powerful and be mighty, they take on the image of those powerful animals and birds and it is quite amusing really. I enjoyed the sentiment here and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Well, I didn't think I should write America, Russia, China etc that would have given it away. Nostradamus wrote in code. K xx
Comment from mermaids
Excellent Biblical poem that captures well the book of Revelation. I like how you describe the lion, bear, dragon and eagle interact with each other. Best wishes for the contest. Now that Trump has been re-elected. I might have to move to your country. LOL
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Excellent Biblical poem that captures well the book of Revelation. I like how you describe the lion, bear, dragon and eagle interact with each other. Best wishes for the contest. Now that Trump has been re-elected. I might have to move to your country. LOL
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hello Elaine, You're welcome down under anytime. I would be scared of what he will do with absolute world power for 4 years! I watched the election and prayed for Kamela. She was graceful in losing (tongue in cheek.) I used the animals to represent the world powers. Thanks for reading friend. Kxx
Comment from BethShelby
This is a insightful post you have expressed in free verse poetry. It is interesting that Christ is spoken of as the Lamb of God, and he is also spoken as the Lion of Judah. I think prophesy is being fulfilled and Christ return will be soon.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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This is a insightful post you have expressed in free verse poetry. It is interesting that Christ is spoken of as the Lamb of God, and he is also spoken as the Lion of Judah. I think prophesy is being fulfilled and Christ return will be soon.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I agree with you Beth. Yahweh is the only hope to free man from evil. And Trump is pure evil. I feel sorry for America and it will flow on the other countries. He is already talking about tariffs. K xx
Comment from lyenochka
And Yahweh is the true Ruler of the entire Universe so we can trust Him because He has all things under His control despite the bad decisions of some people trusting in wealth instead of integrity.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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And Yahweh is the true Ruler of the entire Universe so we can trust Him because He has all things under His control despite the bad decisions of some people trusting in wealth instead of integrity.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Integrity is lost to the Golden Calf. I fear for America now Trump is King again. Our King will take him down and he will pay for his evil ways. Love, kace xx
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Amen and Amen!
Comment from papa55mike
This interesting poem contains a Bible study of Daniel and Revelation. I hope it entices readers to read them both. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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This interesting poem contains a Bible study of Daniel and Revelation. I hope it entices readers to read them both. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hello, Mike, Many thanks for reading and understanding. Glad you liked my style. I had to do a lot of searching to write it. So sorry for America with the elections. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, what a powerful poem! I loved how you brought these fierce symbols to life with such intensity. The way the Lion of Judah's roar shifts the scene toward peace is so striking. For me it adds a sense of hope. Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Wow, what a powerful poem! I loved how you brought these fierce symbols to life with such intensity. The way the Lion of Judah's roar shifts the scene toward peace is so striking. For me it adds a sense of hope. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Wow! Thanks so much for reading Michael. It was not easy to write and bring it all together so readers would understand. Blessings, K xx
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I can imagine why this free form verse is written, stirred in the wake of US elections, perhaps? The world is in trouble and things seem to go from bad to worse. Your strong sentiments, inspired from devotion to your faith, expresses an imperative need for a new dawning. Well done, Kace, and good luck! Debbie xx
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I can imagine why this free form verse is written, stirred in the wake of US elections, perhaps? The world is in trouble and things seem to go from bad to worse. Your strong sentiments, inspired from devotion to your faith, expresses an imperative need for a new dawning. Well done, Kace, and good luck! Debbie xx
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hi Debbie, We are in the middle of a heatwave! It's not even summer. Americans have loosed a tiger. He now has total power. Already sucking up to world leaders. Only God can sort this out. Kamala made a valiant effort and Biden is proud of her. Thanks for reading my friend. I wrote my own poem from the prophecies of Nostradamus who had to write in code; he has been right so far. The Bible also tells the story. Hope all is well. Love, Kace xxx
