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A rhyme for a child3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! And there's that wonderful humor from the man up North! ;) ;) A fun employment of this limited form, Jer, but even better in its real world applications! ;) ;) Thanx so much for the smile to start the day (first review in more than a few days as life's been a bit nutty!) and best of luck to you in the contest, sir!! ;) ;) Yvette
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LOL!! And there's that wonderful humor from the man up North! ;) ;) A fun employment of this limited form, Jer, but even better in its real world applications! ;) ;) Thanx so much for the smile to start the day (first review in more than a few days as life's been a bit nutty!) and best of luck to you in the contest, sir!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nice 20 syllable form for the contest and it even contains a rhyme which makes it even better. May you have a very blessed week. God bless you. Patricia.
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This is a nice 20 syllable form for the contest and it even contains a rhyme which makes it even better. May you have a very blessed week. God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how playful your poem is! I thought this was so funny. You take a simple task of picking up toothpicks and turn it into such a burden! You've got a great knack for turning even the most mundane things into a poem that is unique and creative.
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I love how playful your poem is! I thought this was so funny. You take a simple task of picking up toothpicks and turn it into such a burden! You've got a great knack for turning even the most mundane things into a poem that is unique and creative.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024