Only Ashes
Expressing passion2 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem paints a picture of how imaginations are put to paper. I find the flow smooth and unforced. Thanks for sharing your work, dear Coren, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Your poem paints a picture of how imaginations are put to paper. I find the flow smooth and unforced. Thanks for sharing your work, dear Coren, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for reading, Esostine! I appreciate the review and your kind words!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem captures the intense process of writing. The way the pencil "morphs into hot coal" and the words become alive is beautiful. I love how your poem feels like a journey. It builds in intensity as you read on. So creative. Keep up the amazing work!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I love how your poem captures the intense process of writing. The way the pencil "morphs into hot coal" and the words become alive is beautiful. I love how your poem feels like a journey. It builds in intensity as you read on. So creative. Keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I just started posting here and love getting your feedback. Yes, the journey and intensity as you get pulled into your own writing. It is a beautiful thing.
