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Christmas Morning

A cadea poem for Christmas

11 total reviews 
Comment from Carol Clark2
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The artwork is especially nice. It looks like a picture of a cross-stitch embroidery. I presume the syllable counts are equal to the value of Pi. Is that correct? Nice presentation for the Christmas poetry contest. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    thank you so much for your kind review. You are corrected Izzy crusty look. and the syllable count is the numerical count for pi.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Patricia,

This is a great poem and the picture gives the readers a visual of it. Not only are you brilliant at poetry, but you also create picture art. Nice job

Great job as always. Good luck in your contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your nice review. I appreciate it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 06-Nov-2024
    You're welcome. I have been in a funk and cant seem to get any writing done. any suggestions?

    Cecilia
Comment from EeanBlack
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When I was young, getting that gift wasn't really a thing for me. When I was blessed with a son, though, the gifts became real. The marriage is over, but the precious gift that we two brought into this world, is still whining his way all around Tulsa. My son and I have a special bond.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
reply by EeanBlack on 06-Nov-2024
    It's easy, write well, write often, get reviewed.
Comment from jim vecchio
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You are a great artist. If you could cut out the illo and poem, it would make a great bookmark or stocking stuffer for some liucky kid. And let me be the first to wish you a very Happy Thanksgiving!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
reply by jim vecchio on 06-Nov-2024
    It was such a nice presentation.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Hi Patricia This poem reminds me of Christmas as a child and also Christmas when my own daughter was a child. Each year, no matter what's happening around me, I feel like Christmas gives us a peaceful break. Thank you for writing and sharing this.

Your friend, Alexandra hugs

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it. Turned over.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We always hope that the kids are not disappointed on Christmas morning with their presents as Santa does not always get it right. I loved your Christmas post Patricia and I am glad you are getting into the Christmas spirit, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm sure you made some lovely Christmas memories for your children. You described the happiness of Christmas morning in this Christmas tree shaped poem! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
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I can remember that marvellous feeling when I somehow fell asleep, excited at what I may find in the morning, it was an amazing feeling, which you have portrayed well Pat, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you for your nice review I
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I think we all need some Christmas cheer today, Patricia. And your poem is lovely. Christmas presents under the tree for me is such a wonderful memory to dwell on.
Nicely done, my friend.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you for this lovely review. It is appreciated.
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful Christmas poem about Christmas morning. Your artwork is beautiful and very lovely words. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work