Bright Future
A poem of hope for the future13 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Brenda.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-The first line creates a peaceful mood.
-A very good second line describes it with
effective imagery and repetition of the 'h' sound.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Brenda.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-The first line creates a peaceful mood.
-A very good second line describes it with
effective imagery and repetition of the 'h' sound.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your very helpful review. I really appreciate it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Brenda.
Your poem is very visually appealing and actually instills a feeling of hope in the reader. It meets the requirements for the poem style. We need more time like this and less time like we've been through the last week or months. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Hello Brenda.
Your poem is very visually appealing and actually instills a feeling of hope in the reader. It meets the requirements for the poem style. We need more time like this and less time like we've been through the last week or months. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Right now, we need hope so that is why I posted this. Thank you for the review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You write "the soft ambience of light" and this picture reflects just that. I've always wanted to see these kinds of lights released into the air - I bet it's beautiful.
We need symbols of hope and happiness in this country right now; it seems dark for many.
I wish you luck in the contest with your lovely poem.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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You write "the soft ambience of light" and this picture reflects just that. I've always wanted to see these kinds of lights released into the air - I bet it's beautiful.
We need symbols of hope and happiness in this country right now; it seems dark for many.
I wish you luck in the contest with your lovely poem.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I thought we do indeed need hope and happiness. Our world is in such turmoil. Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 20 syllable Poem contest. What a beautiful photo you chose for your poem's presentation. I am trying my best to keep that light of hope and happiness alive for the future but every day it gets a little bit harder. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 20 syllable Poem contest. What a beautiful photo you chose for your poem's presentation. I am trying my best to keep that light of hope and happiness alive for the future but every day it gets a little bit harder. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from patcelaw
We all do need to have a feeling of hope for our future. So many who do not have that give up and they go into drugs or crime or other wrong things. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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We all do need to have a feeling of hope for our future. So many who do not have that give up and they go into drugs or crime or other wrong things. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem so captured the scene in strong and compelling words. I love the calmness of heart and promise behind the poem. Well done, dear Brenda. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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The poem so captured the scene in strong and compelling words. I love the calmness of heart and promise behind the poem. Well done, dear Brenda. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Nicole Dover
I like the photo that you chose to go with this poem. It is short and sweet. The poem and photo combined make me think of the one scene in Tangled. Good job!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I like the photo that you chose to go with this poem. It is short and sweet. The poem and photo combined make me think of the one scene in Tangled. Good job!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Wendy G
Light, especially soft, gentle light does seem to symbolise hope, as distinct from darkness which represents fear, despair and death. A fine twenty-syllable poem. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Light, especially soft, gentle light does seem to symbolise hope, as distinct from darkness which represents fear, despair and death. A fine twenty-syllable poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Brenda,
This is a beautiful poem and picture is perfect for the poem. Those three lines have so much power. It makes a person reflect on life. You are such a talented author.
Great job.
Good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Brenda,
This is a beautiful poem and picture is perfect for the poem. Those three lines have so much power. It makes a person reflect on life. You are such a talented author.
Great job.
Good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review and your very nice comment about me.
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You're welcome. :)
Cecilia
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well said and presented words of hope that we can all use. Thank you for sharing these uplifting verses, particularly in our current political climate. Hope you are well. God's blessings.
RJ
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Well said and presented words of hope that we can all use. Thank you for sharing these uplifting verses, particularly in our current political climate. Hope you are well. God's blessings.
RJ
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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We do need something positive for the way things are. Thank you for your review.
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My pleasure
RJ
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I posted this to bring hope to our country. I don't think the results of the election are good. I am so saddened by this. This is my opinion. Not sure how you look at this.
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You're welcome. I would have been pensive or careful to say either way. There are things I dislike in both administrations. But the people have voted, and now I pray for the president to follow the rule of law, and tge greater law of God.
RJ