Beyond Repair
When you lose that one things you can't get back2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are very sad words as the heartbreak of a broken relationship can indeed destroy our enthusiasm for life, a poignant write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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These are very sad words as the heartbreak of a broken relationship can indeed destroy our enthusiasm for life, a poignant write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Relationships can both build you up and tear you down. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is beautifully written. The "One day by chance" line shows how this life-altering moment was a surprise. "Broken beyond repair" is a heartbreaking phrase that shows depth of your pain. You've said so much with so few words. This is moving and honest writing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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This is beautifully written. The "One day by chance" line shows how this life-altering moment was a surprise. "Broken beyond repair" is a heartbreaking phrase that shows depth of your pain. You've said so much with so few words. This is moving and honest writing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words and taking the time to review.