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Miracles

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From the ashes of crime, miracles arise

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Comment from Ulla
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Well, so she is pregnant, I'm absolutely sure. But now what? At the moment she feels totally abandoned and I'm afraid rightfully so. That is the cynical me speaking. It would be nice to be proved wrong. We'll see. Ulla xxx.



 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Yes, at the moment Jenna is confused and desperate... I hope things get better and she makes the right decisions for herself and the child. Thanks so much, Ulla.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
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UH-OH. This is just what I was worried about previously. Clever you leaving us with this life-altering cliffhanger! Rebecca is very intuitive. Maybe. Or she's sly and shifty -- I still don't know how I feel about her.
Donatelli needs a swift kick in his, er, ego. (If you don't mind my saying so)--

SO much more to say, but I'm way behind and must push forward! Great writing thus far!

Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Yeah! Donatelli is about to find himself in big trouble.... And the story starts ot shift into high gear. Hope you enjoy!
    Smiles, Carol
reply by karenina on 06-Nov-2024
    Oh! A juicy tidbit to gnaw on! Donatelli's going to be in trouble. I can't wait!
Comment from Wendy G
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She's pregnant - but to the rapist presumably .... Not good. Matthew won't understand - and what a mood he was already in! Eleanor would not have made a mistake about the painting.
Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Matthew's about to have an avalanche of emotions fall on him and he's going to have to struggle through it. Hopefully, with the help of his friends, he'll find his way back home. Thanks for the review, Wendy.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, this is frustrating. I guess Jenna was raped? The nightmare seems to say so. I hate it when characters keep secrets and the long delay in telling someone causes more harm to relationships with everyone. That's why I gave up on Kdrama - so many of the good characters kept information from the very people who could help them. Okay, I'm done venting!

secret life of CJ Grey?" (You have "Gray" later so you might want to keep it consistent)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Yes, then name shouldn't change on a whim or the slip of my fingers. LOL Fixed and I thank you. Jenna well learn quickly the error in her ways and hopefully her friends and Eleanor will help her. Thanks so much, Helen.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Poor Jenna. She's so sick, and then to have Matthew give her the cold shoulder on top of it must have really hurt her. Rebecca is certainly a good friend to her, and she needs one now. Good writing, and a good chapter. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    I think Rebecca and Jenna will bond together with both of them struggling with things from the past. thanks for the review. Have a great day!
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
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Excellent chapter, wouldn't change a thing. Of course she is pregnant. Now what? Being pregnant when you are in a bad place is a story that can have so many endings. I will keep reading...Esther

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Hello, Esther... So much is about to unfold...like an avalanche on top of everyone. Hope you enjoy the story as we proceed.
    Smiles, Carol
reply by Esther Brown on 06-Nov-2024
    Can't wait.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Chapter 6 is posted and 7 is in the wings waiting. LOL
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Why to finish a chapter, to let me hang on, is she or she is not. Wow, a new story curious to see how this will flow. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Hello, Iza... You are so kind. I am glad you enjoyed this chapter, The story is filled with many twists and turns as we go. I hope you continue to follow and enjoy.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
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I think I have that funny feeling that she's quite obviously pregnant, but surely her period could be absent also. But then some keep having them anyway, beautifully written, my friend Carol, your episodes are consistently good, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
    I think she chalked it up to the stress of the rape...either that or she just blanked it out so she didn't have to think about it. Either way it has and will make a deep impression o her life. Thanks for the review and comments.
    Smiles, Carol
reply by royowen on 05-Nov-2024
    This could find Matthew out.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I had hoped Jenna had a stomach virus or the flu. But now we know she might be pregnant as a result of a rape. Or is it? Will she have to decide how to handle being pregnant by a rapist, or will she need a DNA test? This is deep.

I'm glad you included a slight recap of what happened in the past with Eleanor as a wealthy artist and Jenna not realizing Eleanor was her mother. This helps new readers understand the history.

You are off to a riveting start.

Check out your seventh paragraph.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    I thought others might not have read the other books so a little backup wouldn't hurt. Nice that you noticed. Glad you are enjoying the book...your thoughts mean a lot to me.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
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you just had to stop it right there huh? you know it is a good thing you only give this to me in small pieces because I wouldn't get anything else done, great terrific job

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Good day, Marilyn.... Glad to see you are chomping at the bit for another chapter or two.... the drama is building! Can't wait to hear what you thought.
    Smiles, Carol