After The Storm
An aftermath2 total reviews
Comment from Mary Lou Steed
I was with you the first two lines; especially not sure what a rover is. BTW, I can't imagine writing a 20 syllable poem! Keep it up.
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I was with you the first two lines; especially not sure what a rover is. BTW, I can't imagine writing a 20 syllable poem! Keep it up.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congratulations on your first post! You've beautifully share the difference between the calm after a storm and the "burdens" that remain. I love how you show the sun rising. For me that symbolizes hope. You share such deep emotions with such few words. The poem flows nicely. This is a wonderful first post! So well done.
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Congratulations on your first post! You've beautifully share the difference between the calm after a storm and the "burdens" that remain. I love how you show the sun rising. For me that symbolizes hope. You share such deep emotions with such few words. The poem flows nicely. This is a wonderful first post! So well done.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024