Dragonfly Reflections
Unbidden, random memories flit in and out...22 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, Dragonfly Reflections, has the proper formatting and seems to allude to the millions of memories that we can only touch on without fully reliving them.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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This twenty-syllable poem, Dragonfly Reflections, has the proper formatting and seems to allude to the millions of memories that we can only touch on without fully reliving them.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanx for including me in your 'catch up' routine, Sir Bill -- I know you've probably got a immense listing and I am greatly appreciative! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a very creative poem. The picture is so colorful. I like dragonflies. I find them so interesting. The words you used in the poem go well with the picture. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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This is a very creative poem. The picture is so colorful. I like dragonflies. I find them so interesting. The words you used in the poem go well with the picture. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanx for the review on this short one, my lady -- good to hear from you (again)! You enjoy the weekend and get ready for another GREAT week coming up! :-) Yvette
Comment from Shanbreen
Well done, Yvette. Your 20-syllable poem so very well reflects the dappled aberrations, the random memories that flit in and out of the mind. The painting depicts "happy" memories. Unfortunately, they get lost over time. Best for the contest, Yvette.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Well done, Yvette. Your 20-syllable poem so very well reflects the dappled aberrations, the random memories that flit in and out of the mind. The painting depicts "happy" memories. Unfortunately, they get lost over time. Best for the contest, Yvette.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Wow!! What a wonderful surprise, sir! ;) Thank you so much for the awesome stars on this one -- so very much a big smile at the end of the week!! :) My apologies for the delay... but I'm off for a couple of days (worked open to close every day til now) and am trying to catch up! You enjoy the weekend out there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from patcelaw
There are many times when in this life we find that we have memories of our past that split in and out of our mind. I enjoyed this poem very much and I enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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There are many times when in this life we find that we have memories of our past that split in and out of our mind. I enjoyed this poem very much and I enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this shorty, my lady! ;) Have a great week out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Do like your rhyme scheme and your alliteration flourishes throughout this contest post.
I like the simplicity of your font choice for this type of poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Yvette,
Do like your rhyme scheme and your alliteration flourishes throughout this contest post.
I like the simplicity of your font choice for this type of poem.
Mark
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanx so much, Mark, for the review on this one -- always so good to hear from you over here!! ;) Sorry for the delay as I worked open to close for the entire beginning of the week.... Take care out there and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
This is an interesting submission seeing how it is based on a number of syllables. You meet the style requirement for the poem but you have used a word that I have never seen in a poem before today. I probably haven't seen the word susurrations since it's such a quiet term. There you are using those polysyllabic words again.
Good luck in the contest.
Z
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Hello Yvette.
This is an interesting submission seeing how it is based on a number of syllables. You meet the style requirement for the poem but you have used a word that I have never seen in a poem before today. I probably haven't seen the word susurrations since it's such a quiet term.
Good luck in the contest.
Z
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Yeah, ya gotta watch the crazy blonde... you just never know what that pen and that nutty mind of hers will come up with next!! ;) Thanx for stopping in on this shorty, Z, and especially for the grin to start another long week (...such a quiet term indeed!)... You take care out there and have a great week! ;) Yvette
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You have some FUN this week.
Z
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Yvette,
This is a well worded and rhymed short poem that describes the artwork well. I like the colorful display.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the upcoming week.
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Hi Yvette,
This is a well worded and rhymed short poem that describes the artwork well. I like the colorful display.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the upcoming week.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Well, hello there, Joan!! So good to hear from you.... again, yet another person that I know I was 'in fan touch' with on a regular basis years ago, but who has seemed to 'dropped off' my notifications upon my return... ugh!! :/ :/ Yeah, long story there, but I'll have to reinstitute the 'fanning' as I miss your pen! And thanx for stopping in on this one - always so good to hear from you, especially since it's been so long! Hope to be hearing more from you soon, my lady! Take care out there and enjoy the week! :-)
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Welcome back, Yvette. Thanks for the review and refanning me. I think a just made up that word. I have fanned you back.
Joan
P S While you were gone I published a book title "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". I have provided a link to it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile bio page.
Joan
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You have used your twenty syllables beautifully in this one Yvette as you contemplate on those random memories that flit through. like this beautiful dragonfly. Loved the alliteration too. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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You have used your twenty syllables beautifully in this one Yvette as you contemplate on those random memories that flit through. like this beautiful dragonfly. Loved the alliteration too. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Oh, Valda... THANK YOU! Those shining stars are a bright part in the beginning of another long week! So glad this one touched you as it did... it was one of those contemplative times spent on the bench overlooking my back yard... :-) Take care of you and have a great week out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme, as well as alliteration.
-Good opening lines as we wonder about the aberrations.
-Good closing lines that stir up memories that have been lost.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme, as well as alliteration.
-Good opening lines as we wonder about the aberrations.
-Good closing lines that stir up memories that have been lost.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- always look forward to your contemplative analysis -- so helpful and reassuring! ;) Take care of you and have a great week out there! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. You have a great rest of your week, too.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, I think this contest is sewn up -- your 20-syllable poem is wonderfully evocative and will undoubtedly resonate with many readers -- I know it does with me. And it rhymes, to boot! Excellent!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Well, I think this contest is sewn up -- your 20-syllable poem is wonderfully evocative and will undoubtedly resonate with many readers -- I know it does with me. And it rhymes, to boot! Excellent!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Yeah, not holding my breath on that one, my lady, but thank you for the encouraging review! You always know how to share a smile! ;) Take care of you today! ;) Yvette
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It's wonderful, Yvette.